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David Denton
Member since July 11, 2026
Member for 10 days
The Rookie
He swung the bat three times and got three hits.
I say that first for all those just the facts
Folks who couldn't care less about the tale
Behind the tape, which tale in fact distracts
From the essence of the game, the numbers
Which encompass all that really matters
About a game that's broken hearts in two,
And left the hopes of grown men in tatters . . .
But numbers wouldn't tell you he'd not played
The game before; some scout found him upstate
Throwing hay the same way mortals throw stones,
And from that view alone knew he'd be great
If he could learn to hit a ball with wood.
But first he had to be convinced to try.
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Money didn't move him; neither did fame.
The scout was working hard to find a why
To motivate this giant of a man
To trade in bales of hay for balls and bat.
For reasons we may never know, it worked.
“I'd like,” he said, “to try my hand at that.”
And so he did, for one game (or a part).
Three times up, three pitches seen, three balls hit
Hard—you could hear them whistle through the wind.
But then, that fourth at-bat he up and quit,
Walked straight off the field without looking back.
He never said a word to anyone
Explaining what it was that changed his mind
And made him suddenly decide, “I’m done”
I found him in his field later that day,
In working pants and shirt he'd sweated through.
No words passed between us for a while
As in that field a crop of silence grew.
“I guess I like the game all right,” he said,
When finally he took a break from hay.
“And I could hit that ball, no problem there,
And I'd be glad to trade in work for play.
But that last ball went buzzing past my face
And scared me so I near forgot my name.
Maybe I'm a coward, I'll let you decide,
But I'll not lose my head for any game.”
That's all he said; we never spoke again
Of baseball games, or bats and balls, or fear.
We leave the past behind us once it's gone—
That's always been the way we do it here.
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"Fireflies, Promise, and Possibilities" by @William Lynn
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About Me
I fell in love with poetry in high school when I was introduced to Robert Frost—real, accessible, beautiful, lyrics that resonated. I wrote for therapy and the simple joy of creating through observation and self-expression.
Location: USA
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