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Darkmoon
Member since August 30, 2015
Member for 10 years, 9 months
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the dark secret
It lies with in these darkest corner of my self being
The secret no one will ever know
The secret that I'll take to my grave
The one no even my friends or family know not
The secret that my solo only knows
The secret that I have that will slowly kill me
That will slowly devouring me alive
Into a deep dark trench with one light in sight
except the light of that dark secret that know one will know no one?.
Darkmoon’s timeline
- August 2025
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30 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- August 2020
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30 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2016
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30 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2015
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04 WedCritiqued
"Reflections on an Uncaring World" by @Pugilist
"Now I understand why u wrote this it think it's because life is too short and at any minute your heart could stop and that would be the end but that is not the point of life the point of life is the experience the thril…" -
04 WedFirst critique offered
on "Reflections on an Uncaring World" by @Pugilist
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03 TueReceived a critique
on the dark secret from @wesley snow
"I'd like to invite you to Barbara Write's new workshop. Keep your eyes open for a notification elsewhere. Look for a blog on The Stream. I think you would have fun and you might even learn something you didn't know. Wha…" -
02 MonReceived a critique
on the dark secret from @judyanne
"Welcome This is a good write for your initiation here :) I like the theme and clever use of metaphor. There is something I'd like to share with you... The more succinct free verse works better in the long run.... or so…" - September 2015
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07 MonReceived a critique
on the dark secret from @China Blue
"third sentence I'm assuming that no is a not? I found the use of The at beginning of each sentence distracting I'm not a fan of repeating words such as this may I suggest( and it is only a suggestion) 2nd sentence that…" -
06 SunReceived a critique
on the dark secret from @wesley snow
"I like the subject. I have recently had another conversation about that "inside" part of us where we will always be alone. This is another perspective on that thought. Our personal secrets would be hard for others, but…" -
05 SatNew follower
@Dawning
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02 Wed
- August 2015
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31 MonFirst publication
the dark secret (since unpublished)
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30 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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