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Cristiano Williams
Member since April 27, 2017
Member for 9 years, 1 month
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Yesterday is gone, today is here
The future remains the offspring of today.
For as the day melts into night and night to day
Our hope for the celestial abode persevere.
Cristiano Williams’s timeline
- April 2022
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27 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2018
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27 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2017
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06 SatReceived a critique
on Suggest a title. from @wesley snow
"this is essentially free verse. The ta - TUM of iambic rhythm is simply not there in most cases. My suggestion? Don't force it. Listen to it after you've penned it and read it naturally as though it were not poetry. The…" -
04 ThuReceived a critique
on Suggest a title. from @judyanne
"So sorry ... it is for the shop after all.... the above edit I did is in free verse, not iambic.... Your poem is not iambic pentameter, I'm afraid Good try though... do persevere, it will come I have parsed it to show y…" -
03 Wed
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03 WedReceived a critique
on Suggest a title. from @judyanne
"It has a nice even rhythm to it.... I'm presuming this is not for the workshop as it isn't iambic, rather mixed verse A tiny grammar error Our hope for the celestial abode persevere. You can have Our hope for the celest…" -
03 Wed
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03 WedReceived a critique
on Suggest a title. from @jane210660
"If this is for the metre workshop, its title is not relevant as it is to show you have understood iambic pentameter. It needs saving under the workshop tab. Go to edit, scroll down to workshop, select metre workshop and…" -
03 Wed
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02 TueReceived a critique
on THE BLUEPRINT TO A WONDERFUL EXISTENCE from @themoonman
"I may have some ideas for your poem but they are only suggestions and based on my understanding of the poem, which may be absolutely different than yours. First, I'd get rid of the line Eumolpus mentioned, it is cliche…" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on THE BLUEPRINT TO A WONDERFUL EXISTENCE from @Eumolpus
"I cannot find the center of the poem. Keep at it. Death is no easy subject! I would not use "miles to go before I sleep" as part of a poem, it is of course one of the most famous lines in modern poetry. I think the idea…" -
02 TueCritiqued
"The Letter" by @Keith Logan
"Sorry for my initial comment but I was commenting on the Last line of the second stanza." -
02 TueCritiqued
"The Letter" by @Keith Logan
"Nice piece dear but couldn't get clearly the last line. 'Inconsistent' or 'Inconstant'?" -
02 TueFirst critique offered
on "The Letter" by @Keith Logan
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01 Mon
- April 2017
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27 ThuFirst publication
ODE TO THE MOON
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27 Thu
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27 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Location: Nigeria, NGA
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Workshops
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| Meter... The Workshop. | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2017-04-29 | Concluded |