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Bullet423
Member since August 9, 2022
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Restless meanings
I remember being so young, I used to cry.
Over inevitable realizations, we each must die.
Cursing creation, for these desperations of why.
Still didn't understand the way these souls fly.
My place in the universe or these slices of pi
Just a slave to vanity with attachments of "My"
I'd rather be alone then disappoint in more sighs
Taken me years in self worth being overanalyzed
To see I'm surrounded by strips of old dead flies
Within fears that I've come to love & immortalize
My demons I'm still afraid to look into their eyes
Scared of hellos turning into more good-byes
So I run away, for Coastal Burnt Sunset Sky's
Yet, even my hope symbolizes ultimate demise
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Too much information to try & contain
Too much inspiration for me just to refrain
The world is our oyster so go ahead & gain
Just remember the ripples & cycles of pain
Then Love on strangers to dance in the rain
We have one chance, don't die so mundane
Chasing a life of unrealistic comfort & purity
When in reality life is accepting our obscurity
Its a coming of age to this spiritual maturity
To see ourselves as we are, socially incurably
Understanding our void, in all of it's absurdity
You are but the god, over all this uncertainty!
Bullet423’s timeline
- August 2023
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09 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2022
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15 MonHighest posting month
August 2022 — 10 poems
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13 SatReceived a critique
on Restless meanings from @Geezer
"of rhyming with every line and all the variations. You kept it under control and making it coherent without seeming too forced. I'm not sure that I could have kept it going as well. I'm not as big a fan of every line rh…" -
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on Hoard to love from @Ray Whitaker
"your interwoven use of the stanza with a stanza of prose poetry [S5] is interesting. I've only experimented with it a few times. Nice piece!" -
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on Hoard to love from @Jackweb
"Hoard to love is a nice written piece. A rhyme serves three distinct functions in the art of writing poetry: It gives poetry a typical symmetry that differentiate poetry from prose. It makes recital of poetry a pleasura…" -
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09 TueFirst publication
Nostalgic twilight
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09 TuePosted a poem
Nostalgic twilight
"I've been staring in the mirror where the pieces are cracked, waiting on a life that I'll never get back, pulling on my memories desperate for any slack. But no amount of struggle can get me over being so attached, so once again I take a deep breath, & dive into all the black" -
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About Me
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IM A INNERTERESTRIAL BEING OF LOVE,
JUST A PIXLE IN OUR VIRUS OF LIFE!
-POET-MUSICIAN-PAINTER-LOVER
Location: Washington
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