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Bugstar
Member since June 3, 2019
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Bones Around Goop Drops
The stranger is hazy, not from this earth.
Phase me, banger, stomp on this dirt,
and the feeling in the moist earth,
thickly lit with tiny textured bits,
vibrating to the depths of bass,
making a statement, bold print,
dancing skeletons and the clock tower’s bent,
moving bustling crowds all around,
techno crowns and the time of our lives,
gooey vibes in a clear light,
through raindrops a red glow,
smokey breeze, green sticky bowl,
sticking pleasant particles on the low,
inhale slow as you smooth out the bones.
Above you appears positive rainbows,
one after the other,
making time for more bread and butter
with each other.
Bugstar’s timeline
- June 2024
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03 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2020
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03 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2019
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03 SatReceived a critique
on Fish Becomes Woman from @Sparrow 42
"There is an A-Z of poetic forms that I have put on this site have a browse. There are many to choose from and experiment with I hope your stay with us will be productive, Yours Ian T" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on Fish Becomes Woman from @Sparrow 42
"Your poetry will be great I have played with your words. I hope you don't mind but this is a more normal way of presenting works:- Fish Becomes Woman She tried to grasp the wet, silvery fish, But it continued to slip, f…" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on Bones Around Goop Drops from @Sparrow 42
"I haven't seen your writing before , so my welcome to Neopoet and I hope you will join in lots of the workshops and general writes we have here.. A grand Rap, just have an edit and make into a poem of a form we know, or…" - July 2019
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31 Wed
- June 2019
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15 SatHighest posting month
June 2019 — 5 poems
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12 WedPosted a poem
Fish Becomes Woman
"She tried to grasp the wet, silvery fish, but it continued to slip, flowing around her palms and fingers. Firming her grip and stabilizing the fish, she moved it and plopped it into a different tank. The fish swished through the illuminated liquid, and grew at a smooth and intensely quick pace. Its perspective was changing with its body. And changing forms through different species, it began to mold with ease into a human, until the form was exactly like hers, just with a new perspective. The new being climbed out of the unusual tank with ease, body wet, beautiful and glowing, and she warmly hugged her creator. They wandered in a dreamy state outside and the experience of Autumn leaves rushing down endlessly on them, caressing and appealingly tingling their bodies, was experienced. It’s a new day, sunshine." -
10 MonPosted a poem
Herbie’s Trip
"Herbie the ghost emitted thick, glowing vapor as he traveled smoothly through a stable, gooey portal, arriving at a slowly brightening dimension on the same world. Herbie feels like splashing pleasurably around in a nearby marble fountain, so he does. Now, continuing on his trip to nowhere, he soars, high, emitting a vapor trail, landing smoothly at a nearby beach. The sun is sizzling and he feels the warm sand. Kicking it with his still wet ghost flesh, all the sand all over the world, in every dimension, began to move intensely with pleasure, flowing into slowly sinking holes, appearing, with plants growing out of them smoothly, entwining Herbie and pulling him down into a large appearing sink hole.........." -
03 MonFirst publication
Freeing From Ego, Building A Fake One
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03 MonJoined Neopoet
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