BrokenShards

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Apology

Posted Mar 18, 2013 · 20 lines · 1 critiques

I didn’t mean to hurt you
I swear upon my heart
When he asked if he could walk me home
I knew I wasn’t being smart
He put his arm around me
He started playing with my hair
I told him I had a boyfriend
He told me he didn’t care
You can’t turn back the clock
You can’t go back in time
He was older and so was I
The chance for love had passed us by
There are times I wish I could turn back
Things are so different now

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And I want to be the girl I was
But I don’t remember how
So this is the girl you’re stuck with
Fragile and afraid
Pretending to be happy
But it’s all a big charade

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March 2013
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Received a critique
on Apology from @Frenchf
"In your poem for all the wrong you did. Well expressed"
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Apology
"I didn’t mean to hurt you"
Open thread 20 lines
15 Fri

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March 2013 — 8 poems
11 Mon

Received a critique
on The Lump In My Throat from @Frenchf
"Some people would not accept the truth. hope this is not a real situation"
11 Mon

Received a critique
on The Lump In My Throat from @Rula
"and it is always hard not to find someone to trust. reads like a child abuse , ."
10 Sun

Posted a poem
The Lump In My Throat
"Tonight for the first time I told them."
Open thread 12 lines
07 Thu

Posted a poem
Dangerous Game
"I am a powerless pawn"
Open thread 24 lines
February 2013
27 Wed

First critique offered
on "NOW!...NOw....Now..........................now?" by @scribbler
26 Tue

First publication
The Runaway
26 Tue

Joined Neopoet
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Apology

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Apology

March 2013 — 8 poems

on The Lump In My Throat from @Frenchf

on The Lump In My Throat from @Rula

The Lump In My Throat

Dangerous Game

on "NOW!...NOw....Now..........................now?" by @scribbler

The Runaway

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Apology

The Lump In My Throat

Dangerous Game

Dark Knight

Protection

Nightmare

Prayer of An Unwed Mother

I Want To Be The Girl That Flies

Winter of My Heart

The Runaway

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