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BrazKiwi
Member since November 7, 2020
Member for 5 years, 6 months
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Respect for the Men in Green
Of all the potential possibilities,
The man is a man of democracy.
A believer of fundamental freedoms and liberties.
One who, in the face of tyranny,
Does what is necessary to claim victory.
He sacrifices his limbs and his innocent mentality,
And for what?
So civilized beneficiaries can claim their rewards are spoiled fruits of insidious mysteries?
These treasonous traitors are the only things spoiling our glorious democracy.
They spit in the face of our men in green,
Men, who sacrifice their spirit, soul, and body; so that we may live in serenity.
BrazKiwi’s timeline
- November 2025
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07 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2021
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07 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2020
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14 MonReceived a critique
on Respect for the Men in Green from @lovedly
"its common all over the world don't control population use chlorophyll only and bury him with nature naturally he was used to camouflage sincerely he was looked after when alive dearly why cry when you are now about to…" - November 2020
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10 TueReceived a critique
on Respect for the Men in Green from @Lavender
"Hello, BrazKiwi, I sense the deep gut here, and for the most part, i understand your meaning. But I am confused by what, for me, seems to be a very important line: what are the "spoiled fruits of insidious mysteries" -…" -
08 SunReceived a critique
on Respect for the Men in Green from @Geezer
"about your line: "So civilized beneficiaries can claim their rewards are spoiled fruits of insidious mysteries?" I think that you may have wanted an [and] instead of [are]? Certainly a political work if I've ever seen o…" -
07 SatFirst critique offered
on "When I dance" by @Viviana Smith
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07 SatFirst publication
Respect for the Men in Green
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07 Sat
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07 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I'm a 25 year old kid from Auckland New Zealand. During the week I supervise stock control, and dabble in sales, for a company dealing in the agricultural industry. During the weekend, I'm a party animal. Or at least I used to be. These days I've been getting around fishing, surfing, hunting, snowboarding, and sticking to a one-night weekend. Things have never been better. In my spare time I play piano and a little bit of chess. Sometimes I get carried away with literature, and that is precisely how I ended up here.
Location: Auckland, New Zealand
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