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Bookdragon
Member since August 9, 2018
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Until Time's End
Until the moon stalls, and the waves freeze,
The Earth shatters and fires tease,
Until gods are forgotten and monsters reign,
Our love will hold.
While we grow old and distant,
With postures sloping and wrinkles dominant,
While we knit and crochet, and breathe our last,
Our love is young.
When you cry out and forget my name
Know that my feelings will remain the same,
When you’re sick, or sad, or tired again,
Our love lives on.
And if you ever need my help
When you’re frustrated, and need to yelp,
If you need my hand, my shoulder, or even my heart,
Our love prevails.
Bookdragon’s timeline
- August 2023
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09 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2019
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09 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2018
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18 TueReceived a critique
on Until Time's End from @chevyvent
""Until the moon stalls, and the waves freeze, The Earth shatters and fires tease, Until gods are forgotten and monsters reign, Our love will hold,." a great sequence to romance noted (Bookdragon )" -
17 MonReceived a critique
on Until Time's End from @Eumolpus
"because of the theme, the easy and romantic sensibility, the rhyme, the meter and form the poem feels like it wants to be a song lyric. You called it free verse, which it is not. It is obviously rhymed. Song lyric is ve…" -
16 Sun
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14 FriCritiqued
"Eye in the Stars" by @Eumolpus
"Hi there! Really beautiful writing. It was very easy to connect with this piece, and your eloquent writing flows magnificently. My one critique is the first lines in stanzas one and two. Although it's a really cool meta…" - November 2018
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18 SunReceived a critique
on By Your Side from @IRiz
"It is heartbreaking poem, I relate very much. The line I curl in a ball and prepare for the end gave me shivers. In short, you have created a jewel. My only suggestion is that the rhymes are too perfect and a bit distra…" -
18 SunReceived a critique
on By Your Side from @Sparrow
"My Father passed in 1963, and since then we have lost all but two of us from a lovely family of ten. My younger Sister left us this year on the first anniversary of her 40 year old son.. It is very hard as yu grow older…" -
17 SatReceived a critique
on By Your Side from @Eumolpus
"This poem brought back my father's death. At first, it would appear the poems is about advanced dementia until the poem seems to shift into the death, (encased in wood). I would suggest finding a way to separate this pa…" -
17 SatReceived a critique
on By Your Side from @raj
"Good to know that the suggestion worked for you... ......................................................." -
11 SunReceived a critique
on By Your Side from @raj
"the revisions look good and so too the rhyme sequence.... one suggestion:- How is this fair could be changed to How can this be fair ..............................................................................." -
07 WedReceived a critique
on By Your Side from @Sparrow
"A write that was from your soul feelings, there are times when we must let go but they never leave. They are but a thought away, it is us that must put a perspective on life, if it be through the passing of someone then…" -
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- August 2018
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31 FriCritiqued
"A cave or sanctuary" by @Sparrow
"Wow. This poem had such great descriptions, I felt like I really was experiencing the cave. I loved it." -
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17 Fri
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12 SunCritiqued
"An ending." by @vandiemenspeak
"Wow! I really love your theme, your layout of your poem, all your descriptions. It creates a vivid image. The one thing I would critique is he line about the 'cat of ingestion'. It kind of comes out of no where, and doe…" -
12 SunFirst critique offered
on "An ending." by @vandiemenspeak
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09 ThuFirst publication
A Sonnet for the End
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09 Thu
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09 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am an amateur poet, I love to read, and I help to foster service dogs!
Location: Alberta, CAN
Favorite Poets
Maya Angelou
Edgar Allen Poe
Beatrice Goldsmith
Robert Frost.
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Until Time's End
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By Your Side
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Nature's Eternal Struggle
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My Ivy
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A Sonnet for the End
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