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bluerose
Member since April 21, 2019
Member for 7 years, 1 month
The Angel
THE ANGLE
The Angel reached out toward my face and said
"Dear child be free"
I turned and said "I can't I'm lost, my path
I cannot see"
"I do not know which way to turn
to stop the pain inside,
an empty spot lays in my heart
from tears that I have cried"
"I feel wore down and weak right now
from years of being strong.
Now that it's time to help myself
I'm doing it all wrong"
I knelt down to the Angel and I said
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"Please bless my soul.
have mercy on bad things I feel
from the pain that's turned me cold."
I said "How could God hand to me
these things that break my heart. Lay
down on me this heavy load
that's tearing me apart?"
The Angel took me in his Wings and said
"dear child, God knew.
he is not to blame what happens in our lives,
from our pain he's crying to.
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