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bjucks
Member since March 9, 2018
Member for 8 years, 2 months
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Pieces of the puzzle
May my image forever hold
Its weight in scale and gold
Distorted it will soon seem
Unavoidable with sweet time
And the space in between
But still, wrap it with a bow
And fancy heart arrows
Because somewhere in there
A wild love is all you know
When you look back on us
After finding out who you are
On your couch, or in the car
I hope you smile and trust
That it was not for nothing
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Despite of how we tried
To empower each other
And mirror endless love
There was nowhere to hide
Something inside me changed
That’s when I began to realize
To love is also to lose
Permanence is fleeting
No matter how you show
Loyalty and devotion
You cannot fix something
That already been broken
bjucks’s timeline
- March 2023
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09 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- April 2020
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25 SatReceived a critique
on Pieces of the puzzle from @Gracy
"Good poem, needs some tweaking because you've missed out on some grammar rules. Will try to return soon. All the best, it's a sad poem but so true." -
25 SatReceived a critique
on Pieces of the puzzle from @c lynn brooks
"that has already been broken (add the word has or perhaps that already is broken very sad poem but all to often true" -
22 Wed
- March 2020
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14 Sat
- January 2020
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05 SunReceived a critique
on Remember to forget from @Eumolpus
"I think that covers it more poetically. My take. Glad you agree. Good poem!" -
03 Fri
- March 2019
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09 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2018
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23 FriFirst critique offered
on "Hangin' Van Gogh" by @trekker
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17 Sat
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09 FriFirst publication
Don't mind me
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09 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: British Columbia, Canada
Favorite Poets
William Butler Yeats
Robert Frost
Edward Fitzgerald
Rumi
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Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Primal Poetry | (syllabus) | Plunge Pool | Started 2019-06-17 | Concluded |
| Basic and Essential Meter | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2018-04-12 | Concluded |