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Betrand Ndomenang
Member since August 6, 2017
Member for 8 years, 9 months
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Betrand Ndomenang’s timeline
- August 2022
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06 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2018
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06 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2018
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10 SatReceived a critique
on THE COLDEST from @swamp-witch
"Hello Betrand! Speaking directly to death in this poem is an interesting strategy! It really works well with the way you have personified death, even without an reference to a grim reaper, which is refreshing. A few lit…" - February 2018
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19 Mon
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19 Mon
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07 WedReceived a critique
on The Broken Heart from @Eumolpus
"it's hard to confront those demons. There are some grammar issues, you do need to edit. but the last to lines will always carry the poem. Very powerful. (Don't cap Blind, consider a comma after "death") Sad poem. But go…" -
05 MonReceived a critique
on In a Glass of Wine from @raj
"Jess has already pointed out what you have since confirmed as a typo..other than that i was pleased to read this poem.. regards..." -
05 Mon
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05 MonReceived a critique
on In a Glass of Wine from @weirdelf
"an elegant piece, Betrand. In the line- And the next life is just a suqual did you mean sequel?" -
01 ThuReceived a critique
on The Broken Heart from @raj
"Title is succinct with regard to the script which pretty well unveil some deep seated emotions Regards.." - January 2018
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21 SunCritiqued
"ALL AT ONCE" by @Eumolpus
"All at once. I feel like this shows the true nature of the human heart. We all want it all at once. This is a nrch theme and well written. We all want everything at the same time but yet we all fail to understand that e…" -
20 SatCritiqued
"THE CATTLE PRESIDENT" by @Chiori
"Though I am not a Nigerian but I've been in Nigeria for some time now and I know that Nigeria's will always try to push the blame to one tribe. Note that if Buhari is not careful Herdsman will become Boko Haran 2.0. We…" -
20 SatCritiqued
"SHEEP CLOTHING" by @Chiori
"The poem shows in dept understanding of a specific sensitive context but some things are not easily understood just by ready. Probably should think of expatiating on them" -
20 SatCritiqued
"STONE HEART" by @Chiori
"Many times we are broken and feel like giving up on Love. But the truth is love will come when it wants to and you will no longer be the captain of the ship." - November 2017
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07 TueCritiqued
"Betrayal" by @lonlyhrtsclub13
"Like to start with the pro. Amazing ending and a great first stanza. The poem is seem to me like an emotional poem, however, There are some brakes in the lines that just disturb the flow of emotions from poem to the rea…" - October 2017
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12 ThuCritiqued
"Birth Life Love and Death" by @lovedly
"Life is an end product of love but its purpose is not love. In this poem you seem heart broken that love fails and life only point towards death. I agree with you to an extend but you missed an important chess piece in…" -
12 ThuFirst critique offered
on "Birth Life Love and Death" by @lovedly
- August 2017
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06 SunFirst publication
VOID HEART (since unpublished)
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06 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: Oyo State Nigeria, NGA
Favorite Poets
Thomas Hardy
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