Betrand Ndomenang

Member since August 6, 2017

Member for 8 years, 9 months

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13 Poems

19 Comments

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August 2022
06 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
August 2018
06 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
March 2018
10 Sat

Received a critique
on THE COLDEST from @swamp-witch
"Hello Betrand! Speaking directly to death in this poem is an interesting strategy! It really works well with the way you have personified death, even without an reference to a grim reaper, which is refreshing. A few lit…"
February 2018
19 Mon

Received a critique
on VALENTINE from @Eumolpus
"The craft is fine and all that, but inside you is a lot more raw emotion which the poem lacks. Love has passion, love has fire..this is a bit on the Hallmark side...read the great love poetry of the ages, so full of blo…"
19 Mon

Received a critique
on VALENTINE from @Geezer
"a little banal, but apt, I guess. Your language use is OK, but you need to work on your rhythm and pattern. It is not enough to have good rhyme, you have to put it in a flow that lets the reader sweep through it. If the…"
October 2017
12 Thu

First critique offered
on "Birth Life Love and Death" by @lovedly
August 2017
06 Sun

First publication
VOID HEART (since unpublished)
06 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

Location: Oyo State Nigeria, NGA

Favorite Poets

Thomas Hardy

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