Annuschka

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Alone

Posted May 14, 2019 · 4 lines · 3 critiques

In the castle of my dreams
Where you are my king
I loved you with all my might
Alone again tonight!

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Received a critique
on Alone from @gregwa8
"it is a sad poem, the dream versus the reality, perhaps? short and sweet. "alone" can be one of the most powerful words in the English language, though of course it can be used in a whole bunch of different ways. welcom…"
15 Wed

Received a critique
on Alone from @Pugilist
"Brief poems can be powerful when the evoke a feeling or bring a point for consideration. I would invite you to review and revise to make your statement more direct. If you would like structure or content suggestions, le…"
15 Wed

Received a critique
on Alone from @Geezer
"is alright and predictable. I like the brevity and the subject. I wish you had spent a little bit more on the setting, but it is relatable. I do think that you might change the tenses either way; past or present. [Are m…"
14 Tue

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Alone
"In the castle of my dreams"
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About me

Lonely, bitter, angry.

Location: France

Posted: 14 May, 2019

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