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Albert Alben
Member since August 10, 2017
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Naive (Fear Of The Unknown)
Trying to remember
The last thing you said;
But for every time I tried,
I have always failed.
I wish I could fill
Every silence with your voice.
As a punctuation or better still
As a song of my choice.
I wish I could spend
Sometime in your heart;
Maybe I would comprehend
How much love we share apart.
And though you try to hide
How much you love me.
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The fragments that reside
In your smile are there to see.
Wait, did I just say you care?
How am I even sure;
That when I'm not there
Our emotions both concur? ?
So if I ask 'do you love me? '
Would you happily give a response?
Would the answer sting like a bee! ?
Or would change the topic at once? 1
I guess someday I'll find out
And shunt the fear of the unknown.
So for now I'll let my mind shout
Till what's hidden be shown
Albert Alben’s timeline
- August 2022
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10 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2019
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15 FriReceived a critique
on Naive (Fear Of The Unknown) from @swamp-witch
"Fear of the unknown and unrequited love can be such universal experiences, that it's hard to provide feedback when this is the content of a poem. However, I think this poem is unique in the way it connects fear of the u…" - January 2019
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14 Mon
- August 2018
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10 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2017
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on MORE THAN A SEAMSTRESS from @Barbara Writes
"Enjoyed the poem. My suggestion is as eumolpus. I truly enjoyed the rhyming" -
10 ThuReceived a critique
on MORE THAN A SEAMSTRESS from @Scatterhatter
"Hi there Albert, A great poem for your friend. My favorite line is Does she hurry while sewing or does she ignore the clock? I hope you enjoy Neopoet. It's a great place to be." -
10 ThuFirst publication
MORE THAN A SEAMSTRESS
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10 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I'm a young guy from Nigeria, love writing, meeting new(genuine) friends and I can never forget that I'm unique......just like everyone else.
Location: Kogi state, Nigeria., USA
Favorite Poets
Wole Soyinka
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| Poets first poems | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2017-06-23 | Concluded |