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Adrien Brook
Member since August 14, 2020
Member for 5 years, 9 months
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10
Poems
38
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Adrien Brook’s timeline
- August 2025
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14 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2021
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14 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2020
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16 Wed
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16 WedReceived a critique
on Lunar Linings from @Geezer
"One would think that this is a tale of vampirism. I like this a lot. Truth be told, this is more "my speed" if you will. ~ Geezer. ." -
05 SatReceived a critique
on Eighteen from @c lynn brooks
"the phrasing did not matter when I said not acceptable Look up the word suicide do you see it as an entire word yes and therefore to dissect is improper english that is all I was pointing out whether I liked or disliked…" -
05 SatReceived a critique
on Grace's Epilogue from @Gracy
"Hi Adrien, same here, I think like Geez. Title, content and spacing all fine, but not sure what you mean by "silhouete" to end it. Enjoyed, Gracy" -
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05 Sat
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05 SatReceived a critique
on Grace's Epilogue from @Geezer
"understandable, than your first poem here. As I most generally comment on the nature of the work and less on the technical aspects of it, I have little to say here, just that I do believe that I understand better, your…" -
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02 Wed
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02 Wed
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01 TueCritiqued
"Low_Battery%" by @Lee
"Hey... I'm sorry to hear this is your last update on the site. I did make an account on the other website a while ago to read more of your poetry. As for this poem: I think this is really good. There's obviously a lot o…" - August 2020
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16 SunNew follower
@lovedly
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16 SunCritiqued
"Manifesting miracles " by @Seren
"Well, this is sort of haunting. The imagery is really vivid and fantastic. I think the rhythm flows really well as well, especially with your use of enjambment. I don't think your rusty. Maybe it's just with me, but I d…" -
16 SunCritiqued
"The monster in my nightmares " by @Liberty Rayne
"Wow, I'm very sorry for what you went through. More than I can say. It absolutely wasn't your fault, and I hope someday you can heal enough to be okay. I know it's sort of empty to say stuff like that, but I genuinely m…" -
16 SunCritiqued
"Desire" by @Liberty Rayne
"This is really clear and concise. Impressive that you managed to do that in just the four verses. And the words are really beautiful. They have a really nice sound together. Very poetic!" -
16 SunCritiqued
"H.A. " by @Liberty Rayne
"Wowww. I'm really impressed by the juxtaposed metaphors. 'Poison apple' and 'candied apple'. I find allusions to fairy tales a bit over-done often, but I think this originality really redeemed it for me. And on top of t…" -
16 SunCritiqued
"Jeckyl & Hyde " by @Liberty Rayne
"Wow!!! This is really fascinating! I assume you have DID! I'm sorry for your struggles... You've depicted it really well here. One piece of advice I have is that the end sort of loses its flow a bit. I think you should…" -
15 SatFirst critique offered
on "Lambs in Winter " by @Gracy
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14 FriFirst publication
Breaking Wave (since unpublished)
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14 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: Australia
Favorite Poets
Olivia Gatwood
Sylvia Plath
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