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Adamou2009
Member since November 13, 2011
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GET THE MORNING UP!
Get the morning up!
Our night'been too long.
For daylight, now I do long.
Out, for dignity do all throng.
Hand in hand sing the salvation song.
Get the morning up!
Sprung, bounteous mobs I can hear.
Forget the flowers of yesteryear.
The new Spring, they'll never sear.
Tendered gore,them all will rear.
Get the morning up!
Groveling, servility never been inhere.
Your roaring silence, don't veneer!
Away chase the mighty jageer.
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To lustering Springs, let's all adhere!
Get the morning up!
Shimmering light, the tyrants daze.
Together, we'll clear away the haze.
Come! Welcome the morning rays.
Ahead, a new, glorious phase.
Adamou2009’s timeline
- November 2021
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13 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2016
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13 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2012
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13 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2012
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02 ThuReceived a critique
on GET THE MORNING UP! from @Candlewitch
"I haven't seen you or your work here until now... So I say to you "hello and welcome". You have written very good poem about Spring. I really like these lines: Shimmering light, the tyrants daze. Together, we'll clear a…" - January 2012
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31 Tue
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31 TueCritiqued
"An older poem of mine for workshop, personally parsed for preparation" by @wesley snow
"I sometimes have that feeling when read my old poems.Did I write This ?I must have been in a sort of trance then.You 've perfectly pictured this feeling in your poem.I enjoyed this poem very much thank you for sharing." -
31 TueCritiqued
"inspired" by @lou
"Writing is an art that's not given to all.For me, you bear more human feelings when you write about others' hardships.This means that you can feel for them.A gift not given to all." -
31 TueFirst critique offered
on "inspired" by @lou
- December 2011
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03 SatReceived a critique
on Earth-ache from @wesley snow
"There is no better way to learn a subject than by teaching it. Start with my shit and be brutal. Jess is. wesley" -
03 SatReceived a critique
on Earth-ache from @weirdelf
"but not going to give you any useful critique until you start giving it to others too. Neopoet is a community, not a feedback service. Be brave. I have learned more about poetry from giving critique than I learned study…" -
03 Sat
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03 SatReceived a critique
on The Little Stranger from @weirdelf
"I'll only add, I like the poem, the imagery is effective, but at times the language is so terse as to read almost like a list. This is one I think you could make into something really substantial with a little editing." -
02 FriReceived a critique
on Earth-ache from @wesley snow
"Talk about post apocalyptic catastrophe. Each stanza is another complete vision presented as pieces of the whole. This poem worked. Period. wesley" -
02 FriReceived a critique
on Earth-ache from @lou
"i like the theme of this poem and it flows for the first three stanzas, the next three don't fit the rythm , although I like this stanza; Greed- sharpened claws, Dripping blood The soil deeply clenched I think it would…" -
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- November 2011
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24 ThuReceived a critique
on As cold as ice from @weirdelf
"It's easy to list atrocities, but a real poet names names and starts arguments. I've got to say that last verse is appalling in those awkward 'poetic' constructions- Human feelings do scotch Your heart door forever do l…" -
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15 TueFirst publication
The Little Stranger
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15 Tue
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13 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
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GET THE MORNING UP!
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